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I had to make a poem in Dr. Seusses style with pictures, so i drew the pictures in flash, so i decided to submit it too.

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I admit a little bias because I do like the Library. But this was great, I really liked it. Also the song you picked for this, although its not the library's song, it is such a good song, and the library doesn't really have a powerful song. It is more of an eery song, which is ok for the game, but it is nice to just hear a different song for your book.

ANIMATE!!!

animation ... thats what it lacks... it would be better if you animated and voiced over the poem. then continue on with the other levels! ^_^ :D

I think its good but.....

The concept is awsome but it fails to grab my attention. Maybe i am jaded from all the cyber eye candy but i think that you should redo this one and ANIMATE ANIMATE ANIMATE!!! I guarentee that you will go far with this conceptual idea if you make good use of the flash software!!

((( NEAT DRAWINGS )))

This was a neat idea, the artwork was ok but could use some fine dtail and better color tones, the poem well its ok but i like dthe drawing better, overall i was pleased with the outcome, so nice job, keep it up...

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Nice

Thanx. And if your wondoring y i sed thanx was becuz, I had to rite a poem for skool. So i used this poem. Sorry and thanx again :)

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