343 Guilty Spark poem

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I had to make a poem in Dr. Seusses style with pictures, so i drew the pictures in flash, so i decided to submit it too.

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I admit a little bias because I do like the Library. But this was great, I really liked it. Also the song you picked for this, although its not the library's song, it is such a good song, and the library doesn't really have a powerful song. It is more of an eery song, which is ok for the game, but it is nice to just hear a different song for your book.


animation ... thats what it lacks... it would be better if you animated and voiced over the poem. then continue on with the other levels! ^_^ :D

I think its good but.....

The concept is awsome but it fails to grab my attention. Maybe i am jaded from all the cyber eye candy but i think that you should redo this one and ANIMATE ANIMATE ANIMATE!!! I guarentee that you will go far with this conceptual idea if you make good use of the flash software!!


This was a neat idea, the artwork was ok but could use some fine dtail and better color tones, the poem well its ok but i like dthe drawing better, overall i was pleased with the outcome, so nice job, keep it up...



Thanx. And if your wondoring y i sed thanx was becuz, I had to rite a poem for skool. So i used this poem. Sorry and thanx again :)

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Dec 13, 2004
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